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Membaca buku-buku
this is to point out tge effect of his training
no, he's five years old
no, it's me who has to thanks you... I'm still a newbie and your advises are more than I could wish foe... Thanks a lot and keep on correcting me where you see fit, I'll be in your care.... Lunna-Sensei
she's still alive, I just need the mc to experience the truth of this world first-hand instead of always relying on his memories of the manga and anime
then, tell.me your thoughts but at the point, I have reached I don't know if I can do more that that
check the modification that I made to chap one
I have fixed the plot hole, thanks... Also since he was reborn, he was doomed to have high spiritual energy as for the perfect memory... I cut it off... All his techniques, either he learnt themm by training using trial and error methods or through others.
yeah! That what I'm currently making him do...
yeah! I get your point here... But so far this opness is useless, when comparing him to the other Chunin and jounin of Konoha that have a lot of experienced, he is weak. As he can't be like Naruto and other jinchuriki, and fires strong ninjutsu out of nowhere.... Even though he has a jounin-level chakra, he still lacking in terms of experience and has yet to learn new techniques.
Yeah! You are right, but I firmly believe that those strong shinobi could be taken down if faced with someone that can efficiently use his ninjutsu and chakra... That's what I intend to do with this novel as I proceed forward, I don't want an Overpowered main character because of ninjutsu, tailed beasts or op doujutsu... But one which is OP because of his intelligence and how he uses even the weakest of ninjutsu flawlessly. Sage mode, op doujutsu and anything else will only be bonuses.