Shy_Wolf_2850

Good start but dropped

Oh look…. A dead story

I very much enjoyed the newer chapters. Please write lots more please

To be honest I would like to see it as it would be interesting if they somehow broke the cycle. I mean killing zombies is always fun.

If I remember correctly the zombie one is a closed twin universe. A is infected. A is consumed. A sends infection to B A is restarted B is infected B is consumed B sends infection to A B is restarted It’s an infinite loop as the upper concepts couldn’t stop it technically. The time is just rewound. The reason it couldn’t be fixed was because it became a fixed node of reality. Not even OAA could do anything. To fix it they would have to be outside of everything but they can’t do that as their power comes from the inside. I’m not sure if that makes sense. Plus if they did somehow breach the reality then it would leave a hole for the zombie infection to spread out to the other realities.

I think this is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time.

Good story

Please add more chapters!! I can’t wait for her to learn the breathing technique and wish her eyes to be upgraded or healing factor of some sort. I mean the dragon wouldn’t know of the upgrade so most likely he shouldn’t be able to but a healing factor to repair them and herself would work. Maybe like have super healing factor like wolverine. That should fix the problem until she gets to the next level on her own and the healing would continue on. Oh by the way doing a world travel for Minato with a resurrection wish should bring him back to life. Maybe during the trip she thinks about its possibility and feels conflicted between her eyes and bringing him to life?

You make a valid point but I honestly agree with original comment. The first one was better. Yeah there wasn’t any depth to him but his personality was good. Plus him being young helped as it left room to fill in over time. Now the rewrite kinda kills it. Being a teacher (while new) gives a big disconnect. Maybe it would have been better if I didn’t read the beginning chapters of the original? My suggestion is to delete it and start as new book.

Please make more chapters please