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is there a reason he is like that?

author,i has been limited to free chapters, i want to continue but there is one thing that gets in the way, i don't like mc's attitude to xu min when dancing, mc looks like crazy and weird, i hate it, will the next chapter have something like that happen again? Please reply need a quick response (sorry for the haste)

I have something to ask before reading, is he just a tank without damage?, if you want to protect his family I believe more if he becomes stronger than anyone else than just standing defense without attacking, my favorite motto is"the best defense is attack"

so he lost the power he got from outside, then later he will gain strength by his own efforts. So, doesn't that mean all the story stuff before he lost and gained his own power was useless?

hello writer, I want to read your story but in the synopsis there is a spoiler whose content is that there may be a tragedy later in the story, so I'm afraid to read it because I don't like stories that are too heavy. so if you see my review please reply and confirm whether there is a tragedy or not in the story so I can decide whether to read it or not

Arrogance is okay but not by demeaning other people, there is only one reason someone demeans other people, namely he wants to be noticed, why does he want to be noticed? because according to him he has tried hard to be strong so he wants to get more attention, but a strong person is actually a person who doesn't need other people's attention, he knows enough that he is strong for himself (in my opinion)

armor plots? what about the guardian alliance? does he think They allow such a thing to exist? they must be afraid and like their lives are not in their own hands

doesn't mc's character change a little?, I still remember the chapter where he tortured the person who betrayed him, even after knowing the traitor wasn't completely wrong, but he still tortured him and said 'traitor is a traitor for whatever reason', but here the woman wants to be a traitor anyway but she forgave him

so why did he study cultivation? he wanted to combine mana and qi just to be able to become a cultivator who used spells? if that's the only thing he doesn't need to be tired of combining the two, just use magic to use spells. Give the author a clear goal, like he wants to use spells and weapons at the same time so he wants to combine qi and mana

So mc treats humans like servants and cattle? I as a human don't deserve to read this story