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1988
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I don't understand why there are people who want to revive the mc's son, his system practically revolves around building an exercise for children to fight, what did you expect? It was obvious that it was just a matter of time.
the system can literally copy everything, why doesn't it copy talents or memories? If he put together talents like Orochimaru, Tsunade, namikaze and other strong-talented people, that along with his own talent would help a lot.
Wanted you to do Fuinjutsu for the sharigans of the uchiha clan, something similar to the Hyuga secondary clan's seal, to stop others from stealing the sharigans, it could be something like on the death of the seal's host or if he activates the seal by his own chakra the seal destroys chakra pathways and eye veins.
Why does the mc have a Fuinjutsu (sealing arts) for the uchiha sharigans, something like if the host dies or activates the seal by their own chakra, the activated seal would destroy the eye blood vessels and the chakra pathways of the uchiha eyes, thus blinding the sharingan would lessen other people's greed as well as protect the uchiha.
And really disappointing. The mc is a total simp, totally forced relationships and without any kind of construction, an example of this is one of the first cap that sona sitri appears out of nowhere at his house and we know that they liked each other, if it was to have some kind of relationship, I would prefer that had rebirth instead of transmigration to be able to build characters. Mc has a hatred for his father and his relatives that disappears as if it never existed. But the worst thing for me was the forced relationship he had with Aika, who to say from the interactions they had, she seemed more like a boring girl who keeps bothering the mc, but she, by the work of "destiny" discovers the supernatural and the mc wants to keep her with their memories because they are friends. hahahahaha
Very good, I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter more and don't stay in the same Hogwarts as usual, I liked that you use elements of Indian culture, you don't see that much. (google translate)
Very good, I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter more and don't stay in the same Hogwarts as usual, I liked that you use elements of Indian culture, you don't see that much. (google translate)
thanks for the chapter, I particularly prefer longer chapters or at least finish a fight in one or two well done chapters, even if I have to decrease the frequency of release. (google translate)
They, mc and Wesley are only assimilating physical power and martial knowledge, or are they also assimilating Qi type, general knowledge, talents, soul strength and etc? (Google Translate)
As he won't have devil fruit I was thinking, conqueror haki and basically a spirit attack so you could make him use it otherwise more as a bridge to communicate with sea kings to aid in battles or seagulls and other animals to have information of the 4 mates and the grand line in an easy way.