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LibofAl1dDiterbitkanThis is an enjoyable read that I don't understand why people hate so much. The writing at the begining was a little rough but the way the story has progressed since then has been fantastic. The only warning I can give is that if you prefer the mc to have to work for his knowledge or skills this isn't the novel for you, otherwise I look forward to reading each new chapter.
- LibofAl1dBerkomentar
There will always be people who will complain about what you write, why listen to them when you have others that really enjoy your work. Keep going till you finish or no longer want to write but never let others dictate what you do.
Should I drop this novel? - LibofAl5dBerkomentar
You can't block the killing curse with magic under normal circumstances, you have to conjure a physical object to block the curse. The 2 known exceptions was sacrificial magic from Lily Potter to save Harry and at Tom Sr grave when Voldemort and Harry's wand syncronized as brother wands leading to the intermingling and blocking of magic.
The narrative abruptly cuts off, leaving the reader in suspense about the unfolding events and the identity of the new threat. "Kedavra!" The word sliced through the air, but John hadn't anticipated Quirrell, driven to madness, would dare to strike first. Nor had he expected to find himself in the position of a savior. Cradled in Hagrid's arms, John acted swiftly, pushing Harry and Malfoy out of harm's way. The force of his action caused him to tumble to the ground. The Killing Curse, a sinister green light, sped towards him, but at that critical moment, the amulet he wore sprang to life. The Armor Curse it unleashed collided with the Killing Curse, significantly weakening its lethal power. Quirrell, already debilitated by Voldemort's influence and a subsequent confrontation with Professor McGonagall that left him nearly incapacitated, couldn't muster a strong enough curse. The Iron Armor Curse effectively blocked it. Though the impact sent John flying, he was certain it wasn't fatal. As he drifted into unconsciousness, the sound of hoofbeats filled the air - reinforcements had arrived. Quirrell, not waiting to see the outcome of his attack, fled, pursued by the arriving horsemen throughout the night for his folly. - LibofAl30dBalas Mirko22
I'm not expecting him to start at the top, but I am dissapointed that you went for a trope/ the easy way through this when you could have had his body continue to repair itself and have his lineage deny the devil pieces at the cost of delaying/ nerfing any abilities it may have provided. This could have been used to have Rias gain a huge intrest in him and maybe even act as if she saved him and then try to create a mutually benificiary relationship at first. Instead it is the typical 'you aren't strong enough so now choose to either die or become my slave and while I say and think that I treat you well I will actually neglect you as I try to fix my own issue before even thinking about yours.' situation that most are bored of by now. I am not even really upset about that I am more upset because I thought I would get to see another DXD mc who isn't a devil. Still going to try though since I know you won't rewrite your plot just because of a rando on the internet.
Ch 7 Chapter [7] - LibofAl1mthBerkomentar
Most wizarding kids are from 'pure' blood families, including potentially Cedric, most just aren't from the Sacred 28. The Abbot family is part of the Sacred 28 and Hannah Abbot will be sorted into Hufflepuff next year, and while called blood traitors the Weasly family are also still a pure blood family of the Sacred 28. Fawley is another Sacred 28 pure blood family that tends to be sorted into Hufflepuff.
What's going on, besides Scamander, there are actually pure-blood families coming to Hufflepuff? This is really rare. - LibofAl1mthBalas Alesand
doesn't matter how many OCs are introduced if they are dead in the end so don't worry about it.
[AN: Imagine Juuzou Suzuya from Tokyo Ghoul.] - LibofAl1mthBerkomentar
There is only one Ying Yang beast on each planet so good luck.
However, Su Wen doesn't believe that his ability can locate the Yin Yang Beast. - LibofAl1mthBalas MrProne
It should hopefully only be for the first few soul rings when the difference in strengh isn't that large.
While shooting out flying swords to disrupt Xiao Chenyu's attacks, Su Wen maneuvered around him, simultaneously drawing Origin Soul Power from the Martial Spirit Space to replenish the consumption. - LibofAl1mthBerkomentar
Miki or Mika could also be used as endering and slightly embarassing nickname for Mikeal.
"H-honey?" I said with a look of surprise. - LibofAl2mthBalas Soapety
I think this look is much better. The muted colors and half mask really work for the more anti-hero or villian like look.
(Images) - LibofAl2mthBerkomentar
Ra is a good choice as he is one of relativly few God Kings of said divinity. I can only think of 2, and Ameturasu is the other.
I would like to try my new ^Ra^ Gaunlet yeah I named it after the sun god of Egypt like that one better then Polo Boy or Helios he's cool but Ra sounds better. - LibofAl2mthBerkomentar
This is supposed to be War God though, right?
[World Champion (5)] - LibofAl2mthBerkomentarCh 16 Chapter 16
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If Qin Xiao doesn't kill at least a 90,000 year beast for this mission I will be upset. If he kills a 100,000 year beast and it fuses with his current rings that would be a great boost to the average ages of his rings.
Task Reward: The Soul Ring of the slain soul beast will fuse with your own Soul Rings.detailI've already become a Titled Douluo and now the System shows up?Derivasi dari karya · Proud fried cake - LibofAl2mthBalas xImBlackLegend
I think that it means that it cost 25 atribute points to break his bodies natrual limit and increase his stat beyond 50.
Physical strength 50(need your quantity/2 to overcome your body's limit = 25 points) - LibofAl2mthBerkomentar
Snake Orb
Over the years, when Surtr second learned of his affinity for Gravity magic he had forced him to use it on himself like in Dragon Ball. Or the knockoff version that existed in DxD which he could not remember the name of.