Thanks.

When you get that book puvlished update up cause I imagine it’ll be good, considering the quality of this story.

No no I like the beginning some people can appreciate good story telling

Fair enough

The grammar is actually unreadable.

You need a better synopsis

Stop talking to a charcter like he’ an actual person if you have a gripe take it up with the author.

Wow that’ s really good art. Could you send the discord link?

Thanks for clearing that up for me.

This is getting a little cliche.

Is this inspired by the author’s pov?

Yo come back.

I think if you up your release rate to 4 per week you Nobel could get big.

This novel has a whole different vibe now, it would benefit from a cover change.

Is there no cool down for pause?

Sarcasm

Huh?

Is that title a hamilton refrence

This is a good webnovel. Although the main character can be dense at times and doesnt plan for anything even though hes in a new world the grammar and system nake up for it. wish we knew more about the world though because we dont even know if theres magic or if tobi is just weird. 4.6

The dialouge is a little chippy and i think theryre jumping to conclusions with a blood pact. they barely k ow each other