Smile_Kumar
Lv4
2021-02-03 BergabungGlobal
-d
Tulisan
380.6h
membaca
139
Membaca buku-buku
Lencana
10Momen
510
Smile_Kumar9dBerkomentarregret and frustration
Lu Yan then took a slight run-up and plunged her dagger into the heart of the defeated woman. From the beginning to the end of the deed, Miya didn't flinch, as if she didn't feel any pain. The only expression she wore until her death was a grimace of frustration and injustice.- Smile_Kumar10dBerkomentar
as good as dead
Unable to do anything to help the unconscious gladiator, Jake gritted his teeth and decided to move on. On Earth, the antidote to hydrogen cyanide was inhaled amyl nitrite as the first treatment, followed by intravenous sodium nitrite. Where would he find these things in a world as primitive as this one? So this man was on his own. - Smile_Kumar10dBerkomentar
Like several years later. And the spoiler was unnecessary
Clenching his teeth, he followed the lame veteran to the one who would haunt his nightmares in the months to come, but also the one who would contribute most to shaping the future Jake. The Jake whose name would make the entire Mirror Universe tremble with fear many years later. - Smile_Kumar10dBerkomentar
3yrs, exactly the time period since this chapter was posted. And yet the mistakes aren't corrected. Author, either take time to edit the past chapters or hire an editor to do it for you.
Lu Yan's technique had already reached an almost unreal level. Even though he had trained seriously for two or three years in this ludus, he was not even sure that he could match her level of mastery. Three years was far too long. He absolutely had to do everything in his power to shorten that duration. - Smile_Kumar11dBerkomentar
The lines in this paragraph doesn't make any sense. Hire an editor already if you can't express the dialogues properly.
"Oh? Yerode that doesn't really surprise me. I'm sure he was planning something against us. If he thinks he can penalize me by defying me when I'm hurt, he's in for a nasty surprise..." - Smile_Kumar11dBerkomentar
losing your one night stand with Camille too
And so he let his anger rise. He thought of all the people who had ruined his life. Those who had caused the death of his parents and orphaned him. His cousins who humiliated him because he yearned for nothing. The Digestors who had invaded his planet and forced him to join an intergalactic battle that he never gave a damn about. That fucking alien spaceship that had come out of nowhere to get him out of his quiet life. Lamine who had shot him in the night and Yerode his boss. - Smile_Kumar11dBerkomentar
potential enemies
"Let the battle begin! " - Smile_Kumar11dBerkomentar
wasn't the digestor's soul memory making fearless till now.
Something that had eluded him until then, but which was of paramount importance. His emotions were holding him back. Fear drove him to be cautious, which in most cases was a good idea. But not here. Not when you had a bracelet that could offer a Path that matched your full potential. - Smile_Kumar11dBerkomentarThey had tried to force the duels, but Hector the number three of the Ludus had put an end to their shenanigans when he forced them to practice with him for a whole afternoon. After that, the two mercenaries proved to be much more calm and reserved.
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They seemed as martial artists to you and now they are pro vr players
It was Lu Yifeng's turn this time. The young man had a well-trained body, comparable to that of a high-level martial arts practitioner. According to their revelations of the previous day, he was also a professional VR player, although incomparable to his sister. - Smile_Kumar12dBerkomentar
the results would be frightening
This blessing was a double-edged sword for the Myrmidians. Victories and successes were highly rewarded while defeats and failures were severely punished. A property that pushed the concept of meritocracy to the extreme. If Myrmid's blood had even a fraction of this effect on those who consumed it, it was frightening. - Smile_Kumar12dBerkomentar
whose fingers were twisted unnaturally
This was directly confirmed by the slaves who came out of the dormitory wing one after another. Many of them had bruises or black eyes. One of them grimaced as he held his right hand against him, whose fingers were at a dangerously ominous angle. - Smile_Kumar12dBerkomentar
it was really uncomfortable for someone who usually slept on a soft comfy bed like him.
It couldn't be said that he had spent his best night ever. The straw bed wasn't inherently uncomfortable, but it clearly wasn't worth a good mattress. Add to that the lack of pillows, sheets and blankets, and it was downright painful for a householder like him. - Smile_Kumar12dBerkomentar
Fire fighter
"He was in the same camp as us. He's Lebanese, former firefighter. His wife and daughter were devoured before his eyes by Digestors, hence his expression of 'I have a grudge against the whole world'. I think he's a good guy, but in his current state I think it's better not to provoke him. We've seen him in action, and he's surprisingly powerful for an ordinary fireman... - Smile_Kumar12dBerkomentar
Any woman around them is not safe or don't let your gaurd down around them, they are dangerous.
"The tall one with darker skin and a sharp body is Yerode, the leader of a mercenary group and a criminal. The man standing next to him, who had lost his long beard at the barber's earlier, is Lamine, a skilled marksman. He can see in the dark and never misses his target. It's not good to be a woman with them around. » - Smile_Kumar13dBerkomentar
And Dude hasn't used that aether stat on his weapons yet.
Jake and Kyle were stunned on the spot by the revelation. They only had six from the beginning: Strength for Red, Agility for Orange, Constitution for Yellow, Vitality for Green, Intelligence for Cyan and Perception for Indigo. Jake had been given the Gray Aether option as a gift from Aslael, but that was for items only. Even then, in order to unlock the Aether Status, he had to be promoted to Rank 1. - Smile_Kumar14dBerkomentar
Dismissed? dude that means you can leave. At ease is suitable here.
"Hmmm... Dismissed. What's the latest news? "Cassius questioned them in his usual easy-going manner. He took opportunity to dismount from his sedan chair, allowing his weary porters a well deserved rest. - Smile_Kumar14dBerkomentar
nice
One by one, they undressed and entered one of the basins, actively rubbing themselves with the plant soap. While they were washing, a second group of Throsgen slaves entered the building. They were all women. - Smile_Kumar14dBerkomentar
Knowledgeable would be better than learned
So what were the benefits of such a penalty? Jake only saw two. One, to make everyone understand the critical importance of Intelligence. Humans being arrogant, even idiots often thought they were right, never thinking they were inferior to those intellectuals who were more learned than they were.