AkuaSenpai

AkuaSenpai#6969

It really says something when you read a book for a genre you're not really in to and somehow you actually enjoy it. This actually makes me want to pick up more similar books as it's crafted really well and has me intrigued. Never thought I'd say that! Keep up the updates, I shall be reading!

Really quality writing! Super impressed with this one; I havent spotted really any grammar or spelling mistakes so far - the story is really gripping. Also, I love Vampires!

Very interesting story, it starts with a fair bit of lore and exposition but it works! The writing gets progressively better with each chapter which is always good, there are a lot of updates and consistent chapters. I’m excited to see where this goes.

You mentioned you wanted me to show you the change in tenses. So in this line you are speaking in the present using present tense words yet in the next line everything has already happened and use of past tense verbs fills the line. Its not a major deal, just something I noticed. I love the story!

A very interesting take on the isekai formula; at times it feels like an authentic period drama with a modern twist. Theres a lot going on and that works to its strength. Some minor issues with tenses in the writing but nothing major - I reccomend for fans of classic lit or who want an interesting interpretation of isekai.

Really strong opening; it gives off the feeling of very early stories like the Tale of Genji but with a modern twist!

Ooooh thats still on my planning list; but quite a few of my favourite anime serve as the inspiration for this. One being Jahy-sama, which I’ve heard is similar to The Devil is a Part Timer! Other inspirations would be the Dragon Maid anime and the So I’m a Spider, So What? light novel.

Really strong opening to the story and a plot that follows through; I feel emotionally drained but in the best way possible. That was intense - really love what you have going on here and excited to see more!

Welp, well I'm traumatised now. Great opening though, really pulled on my heart strings there!