Divine_Marshmallow

I find it to be a little strange when different world themes mix together in novels, cultivation theme, magic theme, advanced technology theme. Next thing you know some dark lord will come running at Lin Mu with a wand shouting Avada Kadavra 🤣

Sherlock Linmu is on the case

-ow- should be deleted

sheer antiquity=>sheer quantity I don't mind volunteering as proofreader

Umm why can't he use water for the water core? Why does it have to be herbs of the water element?

Why can't he use it to develop poison affinity ,as it's another dao

This feels so addictive! 🤩 I'm guessing this is where all those piles of dirt will be going to

The third ring should be about soul cultivation (what he lacks at the moment) ,as cultivation ultimate goal is to combine body cultivation ,soul cultivation and chi cultivation into one.

What about the emergency food pile? Didn't he say he would collect enough food to last for 200 years?

I'd like to complain about the fact that he didn't collect the books from the library of the alchemy clan like he did in the glass clan, and even in the glass clan he only collected the books of the formations part leaving the tools and the forging libraries untouched. He could even copy the books of both the four guardians sect and the empirial library due to the good relationships he had with them. Please dear author don't forget about these things as that makes the mc character more consistent. Like Meng Hao would never forget to take any treasures that were for grab. Or another mc would never forget to soul search a defeated foe, going as far as developing special skills to breach "firewall" like soul defences, automatic filtering and discarding useless memories. When people say to the mc "you should only concentrate on one dao" I laugh in disdain as that is the advice of an extremely mediocre person who never meant to be an mc even if he reincarnated with his memories intact, simply because he has the mindset of a mediocre person.