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your saying you know hes not a genius and then say you want him too be a jonin in 1 year thats whats absurd to me....

in 1 year?????????

Stolen hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's a cliche: mc is better then everyone has a harem and will become king. I don't recomend this one. Also idk why you would skip past the entire childhood.

It's OK until the MC awakens and finds out that he's super-duper special and becomes extremely op. You know it would've been fun to see an ordinary person try and start a mafia in a magical world, but you had to make him OP for no reason. hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I read the whole thing on spacebattles and then found it here, so I was surprised that people disliked it. But if you want to know what I feel makes the fic great, it's the slow pace, plus the fact that the MC gets nothing—no wishes, no golden fingers, no systems. Also, I enjoy getting to see konoha from the perspective of someone who is weak, spoiler (the mc has to fight in a underground fight ring and has to deal drugs to get some extra cash. It's just different from most stories, in my opinion a more realistic view of how the average Joe would survive.

It's fine untill blaze get's introduced (has to be 1 of the most annoying characters ive ever seen) and in my opinion the author is to horny for my liking.

Why system hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This is great. Sad to see all the bad reviews from people that can't handle the fact that the mc isn't overpowered or has an system and all the other op stuff. Not understanding that these things are what makes the fanfic great.

Do what you feel is best it's your story after all.