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It is really a great story though every story has its strength and weaknesses and I sincerely believe the dynamics of this book is in fact thrilling to explore
After reading this chapter, i got a clearer glimpse of the worldbuilding and setting of this book which is quite contemporaneous but too dramatic in terms of the style of writing right here. drama sequence tends to rule out a lot of worldbuilding than prose. so I personally would want the writer focus mainly on using the technique of prose which brings out a lot of images into textual reality instead of using drama.
Hmmm. I like the creativity of the first chapter but I honestly want to see where this leads to subsequently
Greetings! I have added your story to my library as well as voted it and I will make a lucid review on it after reading your work. Thanks for your encouragement
Thanks for your observation. I will do well to read and review yours too. Thanks for pointing out vital observations about my work.
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thanks for your observation
Well keep on writing with renewed inspiration
Nice 😊😀