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is it okay for me to read it even though i havent read the original novel?😂😂😂😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😅😃😅😃😅😃🙃

how much of a scolding will he get from his grandpa and Mrs.Rosie I wonder? someone wanna bet?

Goodluck and Amen

First, Good Job, the start of the story eas not so wonderful but I love how you develop your story from being just a genius to a Experienced one through travelling, I would love to see his journey bug second point, his house, the way you manipulated the scene and chooses hufflepuff for their loyalty and also investing for future follower and Last his goal and execution of it starting from the bottom, befriending the minister, the threat to rita, to speaking with Gandalf with elegance and for showing his stance. Good Job And thank you

Mercy Of Heaven : Heavenly Gate

Sorrow of the Heaven : Heavenly Rain

The entry of the story was very good. The concept , the devil fruit , Goal and there are many possibly route that can be taken, so far , it is good it just lack chapters hehe

My condolences, take your time and stay healthy for yourself and us

God a lot to improve but I am still reading and hoping for a better chaoter but keep up and improve the piece and thanks for updating[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Well Good