Nimil_pardeshi

what about a grownup man who is mentally a child does that makes it ok i never get these explanations these authors give

this is way better excuse than anything like lottery bullcrap

bullshit that's what this is

nonsense bullshit that's what this is

i think he was the head boy at this moment

are you are sick bro

i mean what's the point mc is a no show side character in his own fic i don't mind multiple povs but mc is just useless at this point he is bigger a selfish guy then ajuka at this point and your story is just a cluster fuck i don't even get where this is going and what is the point of him going away like that when he could have done everything from the underworld at this point and again your story is going nowhere when i read this chapter i felt like i wasted my time at least put something good in it

a loser mc with cliche story i mean no one gets to be with their first girlfriend anyways why is he acting like that and i am not talking about those one in a million couples they are one in a million for a reason the way this is going it just feels a waste of life if he doesn't even know how to be a normal kid what's the point is he going to be same for his whole life like this