JohnoTheGreat

This author has so much potential and I can't wait to see how this tail and the characters progress in this. Such a hard workers derserves reward!

Here and there have the same issues of it being a bit long but beyond that the book is well written, I enjoyed it even as someone who doesn't like novels that much at all! All the detail and the way you build the characters is brilliant.

Fair point, gonna try and shorten things down to the best of my ability.

I'll come back to previous chapters and do my best to correct the errors to my knowledge. Thank you so very much for the criticism!

Wonderful and I enjoed it thoroughly, read through and I thought the chapters were well written and a very fun read. Honestly I would reccomend it to others for a quick read.

Funnily enough, I'm from Englandbut I was bad at grammar yet decendt I writing a good tale. i know it's probably annoyed one or two people but I won't stop trying and always trying to perfect what I do best.

The writing is articulate and wonderfull descriptive, normally these types of book do not grip me but this one did for the way it built things up and I plan to keep in in my library fo whenever to update it further. This honestly has been a pleasure to read!

It's impressive as much as the book and story isn't what I read, I still found a way to enjoy it even if it wasn't quite the type of story I enjoy. Well written and enjoyable.

This was a pleasure to read and I will be keeping it in my library, apart from small errors like my own here and there it was a great read and I am enjoying it a lot.

The book is wonderfully written and gives insight to the world and the types of characters as well. It also has a very interesting concept backing it making it all the more interesting.