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Jhonny depp would look perfect as doom

zoan has three transformations base human hybrid beast and mythycal zoans also have one of the elemental ability. kaido has fire wind and cloud yamato has ice sengoku has shockwaves marco has flames that heal u can have earth manipulation or matter manipulation which also gives u size manipulation as sub power u manipulate size of ur weapon which I assume will be a bostaff it's just an idea. the other option is lightning or storm as Jin Mori has that power ur choice

maki not making

aren't u contradicting now just before u called momo a weakling who doesn't deserve ur notice now u want a equal society. either u r manipulating making or ur hypocrite.

it's great 👍 I love the fic. The mystery is intense.

this guy delusional he thinks if in actuality he can win against 3 mangakeo users even after the fact that obito has wood style and bro forget about izanami and izanagi if it came to it itachi or fugaku would used it, and he didn't even had time to test his powers and people while writing forget how much chakra cost for jutsu because of Naruto he has nine tails so he can spam like crazy and Sasuke because he is Indra reincarnation but everyone else aren't, the writing is delusional

instead of hito hito no mi u should have started with cook cook no mi and then like luffy should have awakened as hito hito no mi moon god sukuna

the concept is great but dialoges and overall it's bad writing needs to be improved his interaction are also not good, overall it's like I'm writing the book but I'm not good at writing at all

Marco phenix fire Sasuke amatarasu etc

I mean about the mc in ur story