Khan_Ahmad

that's a disgusting and creepy character 🤢 it was good so far but i am out

pathetic chapter getting a twelve years old beaten purposely and then the self righteousness what do expect from the Chinese MCs it's like fetish for them it needs to be studied ( i know it's translation so it's for the original author )

pathetic

she was a bitch

man these chapters are very big i can't read them in one sitting you should do something about it

man you should up your game you came so many days later and left such a short chapter

many things are wrong in this novel the ages, names , personalities of characters this is just another typical Chinese novel

at this rate he should have slept in his house not many thing changed

+1

there is nothing in this fic how did he make the company out of nowhere how did he heal himself what is his goals how is he doing everything what are his powers how strong is he there is nothing here he is just going to places doing things that's it