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Can we please get mass release?? I want to read fighting chapters together but don't wanna wait couple of more days......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Ethan gave his opinion on topic Tony was discussing - as written in 2 paragraphs above this.

I noticed that other writer also gave their own novel review.... hence doing the same. Hope you guys don't mind.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks a lot Rowan, regarding the dates I think I gave some hints But I guess it wasn't enough. I'll try to elaborate things more in the next chapters. As for MC's thoughts, in which point of view should I write them?? like MC thinking in his mind or 3rd POV?? But thnx a lot for the review. I'll try to improve my shortcomings.

It's not him who got invited, rather his mother. As for the reason you will see as story progresses. And he is 14-15 years old and about to enter high school. I mentioned this in previous chapter.

Can AI even generate a novel though??

You are half-correct I guess?? I'm writing the chapter myself but getting the grammar optimized from GPT as to not cause inconvenience to readers. Hope you guys don't mind it.

It has been fixed, try to see if it's alright now.

Thnx for the review DaoistForthright, it might have been because of my inexperience in writing. But thank you for trying my work and giving your opinion.