Open_Eyes16

I love it :) Please continue to update!! This is probably at the top of my list of wanting to read lol...Only thing is....space out a little bit because it makes your writing seemed too crammed....but only the set up.....your wording is amazing :)

I love this story, please continue to post please!!!!!!

I believe that this is a very detailed work...only problem is I think some of the world can be unreasonable like...5000 words a chapter. Some authors that publish work on Amazon eBook and Kindle and even paperback do not even do that much. But overall I benefitted from this book thank you sooo very much

I can write 2000 words in about 1.5 hours.....But is 5000 words really necessary.....would 2500-3000 be a better number, or would that even be worth it?

This was my favorite chapter

ahhh....good cliffhanger lol

I love your story, I just believe that its a bit choppy but that is natural for some writers bc it is there style. Anyway great job. And PLEASE PLEASE update!! lol :)