Hope_Smith_1896

Thank you. Your appreciation is my reward...

It was such a easy read and really flowed nicely. I did not realize when I had completed ten chapters. An interesting story, well etched characters, I could feel Shi's emotions in every chapter.

my thought too? chicken human :)))

weapon ... broom .... rofl

so relatable...u don;t know who the person is...u feel sorry ...but again what if they turn out dangerous?

my thoughts too

Like him too...very relatable

It makes up a thousand times. This is the best critical appraisal I have read in a long-long time. For someone who does not enjoy reading ‘romances’, to dive into that ocean and then to find merit in it; to have the intellectual acumen to sift the craft from the characters; to be able to comprehend the writer’s mind and what she is weaving; yet be sensitive enough to flow with the narrative and feel the emotions – I know not what to say, should I praise the mind or the heart? And then to find punctuation/grammatical errors – are you sure you are not a professional critic or a professor? :) Well, you have found me out – my writing is ‘naturally’ poetic. It is when I try to curb it that it becomes erroneous because it cuts off the natural flow of words. I guess I must let the river take its natural course and trust the reader’s ability to flow with it. I owe the realization to you, so... Thanks. Having said that, I don’t really understand when someone says – ‘Romance is not for men’ I believe all of us live in two worlds – the physical and the one within us. If you write Sci fi, you are merely taking your readers outer space (into an imaginary setting) while we, Romance writers, take them scuba diving within their own hearts and psyche. What you call Mars, Venus and Sun, we name them courage, love and charisma. Nonetheless, many a thanks for your time and effort. It’s a pity you won’t dive in again, I would have loved to hear your views especially towards the end of the story. Thanks again!

It was a good read...loved the case and the revelation...

Nice read; very detailed narrative, it surprised me at some places...