OechineunAlex

man, I haven't read this fic since the hiatus. Glad to see its still as good as ever

the dub for mars of destruction was so funny, its just 4 dudes having fun

This is pretty good. Although inspired by another fanfic, its actually pretty different from its origin. The system used is different, the characters that appear are different, everything is unique to its origin. Personally, I think the plot is a lot more interesting. I also think you got the personalities of each character correctly. I like how you introduced Ned and the other characters and how it aligns to their respective personalities. I'm not experienced at reviewing so that's all I can really tell you. The story is pretty interesting so just keep up the good work!

Its pretty good, it was good enough that it made me a bit carried away and spend half the day just reading. If you like interesting fanfics you should read this.

Do Assassin's creed!

"I remember", tbh, I dont remember

bruh, who drops a fic just cause updates are slow, I have a fic in my library that hasn't been updated for 1 year, and I still expect a chapter fron it

oh, right, this is a fic

mind computer sounds lame, change it to mental computer, it sound better