James_Stern

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2020-12-26 BergabungUnited States

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James_Sterna year ago
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how is a cat barking?
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James_Sterna year ago
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Why was it always a bloody umbrella corp in these situations? Like, even if the corporate overlords were greedy and evil, you, the scientists, and staff, should bloody know better!
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
James_Sterna year ago
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started instead of sparked
Dante thanked them and entered the car. He sparked it and then slowly moved out of the airport before joining the main highway then speeding towards his rented apartment at home. On the way, his thoughts wandered.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
James_Sterna year ago
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better to use "internal composition" or just "inside"
Dante obliged and got in, sitting opposite Beatrice. The internal of the shuttle was like a train compartment, or like the inside of a carriage. Due to the limited space, Dante's and Beatrice's knees were touching.
I am the God of Technology
Sci-fi · Kotario
James_Sterna year ago
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orc not ore... it's mixed throughout the book
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James_Sterna year ago
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a quieter place not quitter place
As I preferred quitter place, I walked to the back of the crowd and especially hid from the overly kind Evan. He would turn the mood so bright that I would get uncomfortable.
Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
Fantasi · Emberlight
James_Sterna year ago
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not "could've" should be "couldn't"
Eliana was already quite stressed regarding the theft, and more stress wasn't good for her at this time since he didn't want to see Eliana when she was angry. Even if Gabriel actually took the letter, it was a very minor thing. He could've let Gabriel leave over that.
Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
Fantasi · Demonic_angel
James_Sterna year ago
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"holding onto" not "folding into"
Lelin came out of the city, still folding into the white orb. He gazed at the city of light in the distance.
Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
Fantasi · Demonic_angel
James_Sterna year ago
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great naming sense....[img=faceslap]
The name of the burger shop was.... Extraordinary burgers.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasi · Zero_writer