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I really want him to do that homelander speech infront of the crowd..... Like "...you guys should be thanking christ that I am who and what I am because you need me.... You need me to save you, because......I am the only one who possibly CAN."
Six eyes control of cursed energy allows gojo to have infinite cursed energy, his regeneration of cursed energy far exceeds his output..... So it's a bit unrealistic that he is running out of cursed energy as MC said in the chapter...... He might be tired but never be out of cursed energy.
Bro u should have done that scene differently.... Like remember the guy who got to a million without lifeline then on the last question he acted tense and called his father just to tell him that he got the million and already knows the answer and he got it, a million... You should have used it here would have been awesome.
Thats good i thought u would go the revenge route of ian against sarah... Like put her in a ditch and forget about it but you did good with whole forgiving thing, a lot of people may not like it but you have my respect++ for it.
The romance... Not working for me mate. I feel like your exploring unknown territory with the romance, it feels like you don't have much experience writing the genre cause it feels forced and a bit cringe. The novels good though... Just don't spin it around the romance... It's just not good.