so_Mo
I like the fantasy genre, to workout, and to write novels.
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so_Mo11mthBalas Captain_ChaseHonestly, I think I could have made a way better story with all I’ve shown, and more in-depth characters, this led me to believe that the book should be dropped, but recently I’ve come to realize that of course the beginning wouldn’t be the best it could because I was rather new to writing. Even so, I’d rather create a story that I can say I’m proud of from beginning to end, so no I will not be continuing the novel.
- so_Mo1yrBerkomentarThe first was obviously to hunt monsters & absorb their abilities. Next, he wished to use this opportunity to increase his combat experience & improve his combat mastery using the different techniques he had learned in the past week. Last but not least, it was to deliver upon his first target mentioned inside the small book.
- so_Mo1yrBalas ROSE_Ch 31 Savior (2)
- so_Mo1yrBalas Bobyslurp23
Thanks again for the help!
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It is however I worded this wrong, he needs 62 Ki until he can have his next level up.
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Thanks for the correction!
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In the first month, he earned one level up, and in the second one (current month) with ten days left until only one month left until the exams he earned another level up thus bringing him up to level three.
And with only ten more days left until the end of this month, I've earned another level up. Although getting Ki only through daily tasks and not being able to increase my stat points has been a total bummer. However, my uncle says he has two pieces of good news, and I hope one of them is having him stay off of my level three spirit behind. - so_Mo1yrBalas Homelander69
I’d say that he is somewhere along those lines, almost like an antihero. Trying to protect his family at the cost of others. And along with only recieving bad memories and not having them all, thus like before he’s around evil and somewhat of an antihero. Like a being give the ability to increase their own strength but having a somewhat broken mind. (Dang this was a bit long, lol.)
- so_Mo1yrBalas Miguel_Rosalez
My Mistake I should have added in the maxium Ki and the one he receives from not completing the recommendation, thanks for the help. Also, Human Flesh = +5 Ki Other meat = +3 Ki
[Ki needed: 83] - so_Mo1yrDiterbitkan
Almostforgot to give my own book a review! Anyway this review will serve as a question and answer dIscovery of some sort so just leave your questions and reviews below and I’ll try my best to get back to them. Review Wise, I’d say that my first novel is a bit of a slower read early on but if you stick with it, the pace should eventually pick up in latter chapters. Also most things done in the story will most likely always have more than one meaning!
- so_Mo2yrBerkomentar
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"I think we might have the best teacher in the world," Venus said. - so_Mo2yrBerkomentar
I think it might be Jazz and he knows that peter isnt who he claims to be.
"Who do you think sent it? Or what do you think it means?" Peter asked. - so_Mo2yrBerkomentar
Werid flex but ok
"I guess you are not worth a level up either." - so_Mo2yrBerkomentarCh 1 Just an old Book