Lol.

This.

indicating that there is a way to bypass death so early kinda makes the stakes feel a lot less since we all know there's someone with the potential to avert death.

I saw this coming 🤣

Bad move imo

"Lol" literally my reaction reading this chapter, an extra point for originality despite this genre being saturated and another point for the comedy. Keep up the good work sir Magecrafter!

I like the way you think.

😂 I'm flattered and happy that you enjoyed it.

Thanks a lot for your time, I'll continue to work harder to craft you guys a masterpiece.

Whoa, creative! What Webnovel inspired this book?

Mountains? I'm confused now.

Doesn't matter, my mind registered him as one.

Well, I have enjoyed the major bits of the story so far but I find the possibility of me drifting away from that feeling of excitement and enjoyment. I expected the people of the Colosseum to react a bit more than that, you described their reactions in a way that it felt that there weren't as many as you implied earlier and what about the prestigious figures on the elevated platform and the human Gandalf, I believe that it would have been nice if you had depicted their reactions, that perhaps would have built more tension.

Argghh, not the arrogant kid cliche.

Why do I feel that this contradicts my perceived personality of him?

I love how descriptive this is

I love how you went against the annoying trope of " Nobody found it until a chosen teen did"

My amicable grammarian🙌