barley coherent English . xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

very nice _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

aha author could u please slow down with the over explanation, it feels like your characters talk a lot without saying anything meaningful. i couldn't read most of the stuff without skimming through it. good luck and i hope u improve!

didn't expect to find something like this in webnovel fanfic, truly great work. kudos, author.

hey man, your grammar needs serious work. you might want to check out one of those websites that correct spelling and grammar mistakes (like grammarlly or somthing) good luck

A story with a very good premise and character's, but there is no world building and character introduction. the world and it's characters are dumped at you from the start with no care for the pacing of the story, and the power imbalance is a major issue ##spoiler## The MC at rank 1 can sense when his father peek's at him when he's rank 8?? And MC getting immortal rank enemies when he's rank 1???### so it's a good story that's needs more fleshing out for the world and character's. good luck with your work author!!

it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.

xyuuffjiyfhitfjitvuyghiyg ugc jug juvbig jub gjkfkd xbidbsbzudbsnxicbxjdosbz icjs sjxix cjdid xj ifbe isodbd siwossh X by does xbidie sbsixixisbs sbshs

unfortunately the author didn't do his research before writing this ff, there's a huge plot hole in his story. his MC walk's two paths the Magus path and knight path, btw knight path is supposed to promote to something like branded Knight, so if u are a mage u can't become branded knight.the same applies if u are a warlock u can't become a regular Magus. so how tf is something so basic ignored.

are u guys stupid didn't he Saint knight would need the energy that he gets when he kills, it's a hopeless path for anyone else.

would like to read it, unfortunately there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors that I couldn't finish the first chapter. I would recommend the author to use something like grammarly to fix his mistakes. hope u the best of luck.

wouldn't a person affinity determine their power what if he picked some trash c grade how would that help him. it would really be disappointing if everyone he knows or choose has some great affinity.

thanks for the chapter, was wondering will there be any major changes to the story?

if u are into characters,world building, ideological clashes then u must read this. I read this before being rewritten, and it's truly one of the best novels in this site ( I would argue that's it's the best purely from the writing style,but unfortunately webnovel doesn't reward good quality novels). good luck with your novel hyowha.

great story with a interesting mc. the first 700 Ch or so we're one of the best volume's, seriously like I was on the edge thinking oh will he succeed or fail. but unfortunately after that the MC became a marry sue, everything he needs comes to him. and there was a clear divide between enemy and friends, not how it used to be with mixed fri-emy. I'd say read it it's great but after he gets his ** (around ch700-800) decide for yourself. unfortunately I've dropped it.

Thanks for the chapter. Was wondering why does the style of writing feel very different from I am a demoness?