Mad_man13

It seems fine to me, I would say it’s fine unless you think it’s going to take forever because taking like 2-3 months to rewrite will definitely hurt it but if it can be done somewhat quickly then go for it

Great story and a very original Idea. The writing is on point. One of the best I have recently read. My only complaint is that I wish there were more chapters. But that is a good complaint to have.

You did a good job translating keep it up. Compared to others the it is very easy to read

You can go to archive of our own website and get it for free. Just look up lady Gremorys goblin familiar

I mean that is mahoraga amped by a death binging vow so he dosent need to be as strong as that as he wont be boosted for The vow. Plus idk if mahoraga is actually stated by the narrator to be adapting to Dabyra’s existence or if that’s what dabura is saying and he’s just taking a shot in the dark.

This would be the summon from abyss or whatever it’s called where he combines them but it only makes them slightly stronger.

Totalities only work when one or more of a dead shinigami is fused into an alive one

He can’t use totality unless one is dead

Great read all around one of the best I have read. And probably the only good frieren fanfic, I’ve seen

This one, starfire and raven alone justify this choice