Avoidingcross

the reason I'm commenting now is that I've seen authors delete there best works over some keyboard warriors, or give up writing completely, I myself don't post my works because of them on another platform. you have the skills to write. ignore those people and write what you originally wanted to.

I love how it's going in the current version, while constructive criticism is okay trying to change someone else's story is not acceptable. do not listen to those trolls. it might be a fanfic, but it is captivating to another level and truly a master piece that I am always waiting to update! I will literally pay you to ignore those baboons that think it's okay to try and destroy your work. I don't normally praise highly, unless I truly feel a story is worth it. I search hard for quality stories and this is one I'm proud to back up

+99

Wade's healing factor is actually his cancer replacing parts that need to be healed at an accelerated rate so when those cancer cells die there replaced by more instantly, it's why he looks like a horrible science experiment and why he's immortal, because he's in a constant state of dying.

truck kun we appreciate your dedication to the cause lol

Erica's mechs name wasn't mentioned yet, it was lily's that was named sunflower previously....

it was sunflower

it also had a beam attack from its mouth if I remember correctly that you didn't show wich is why I said 5 or 6

I think it would be considered lvl5 due to its size, abilities and its regeneration, though it might be at the pinnacle of lvl 5 maybe just lvl 6

quite interesting to read :)