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Ahh yes, another beautiful girl with a strong character. Seems like the maidens are on another level now. I'm looking forward for this story to exceed to another level.

The story is good after all. I like the fact that the girl or Heart doesn't come from a rich family and lives a simple life. Unlike some stories that I've read. Also, I noticed some typographical errors and some on the pronouns but I know that it can be rewritten.

The action scene in the first chapter is so cool! I feel like I'm part of the Dungeon's crowd and cheering for Flynn. He's a good fighter and I'm looking for forthcoming character development!

I find this story cool because I like reading the action and mystery genre. Sometimes when I read some stories' synopsis I already know what will happen to the whole story but this one's synopsis made me curious.

The synopsis and title are both interesting. The cover is nice too and it can catch the reader's attention. I read the first chapter of this book and I noticed that the author used a good set of words

I read the synopsis of the novel, I found it interesting and good since there's royals involved different races of the fantasy creatures involved there, I want to witness how their story goes too.

Thanks!

When I started reading the first part, I found the characters and the main character cool and interesting, I hope that they will have good developments. The storyline is nice too.

Okay!

Thanks, I will work on it.