HankTheFisherMan

The mc not after het first battle probably

You couldve maybe made it a bit shorter and not just a copy of original.

Are these confirmed?

Its good but its painfully slow. There are just too many words to really enjoy it. Author said chapters are around 4000 word long and the u have a fight that takes almost three chapters… Im at chapter 70 and this coulve been done in 30 and I wouldve enjoyed it more.

Read till chapter 50. Its a pretty decent story, but just not my cup of tea. Harry doesn’t seem to have any ambition and feels like a lifeless doll who just does everything Tom wants. There are almost no interactions between Harry and other people. This can all be attributed to his past and his problems with his soul and stuff, but its just a boring read. It also seems that author is trying to follow the plot closely and is almost changing nothing. Some parts of the story seem missing.

I dont think its good. 9 chapters in and the mc has no personality at all and also no goal at all. Her powers are as bland as can be. The training arc was also just a year passed and now she’s S rank… Nothing is really good about the story, but if you have nothing to do I quess you could check it out.