AnaRose
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This book definitely lives uptown its genre. The descriptions are very good and isn't too complicated in case of readers who don't have a vast vocabulary. I like how the FL is sure of her feelings and acts on that and doesn't budge. This will make the reader want to know how the relationship changes over time. I even liked how when Melody crossed the line when her emotions clouded her, it wasn't just looked over. It was acknowledged as a bad part on her side as a doctor. The story moves pretty fast with things happening with quick pace. I think more narration of the main character's feelings or inner thoughts would be nice! I liked how you correctly explained the honorifics system and used many phrases with reference to the culture you're basing your characters on! Overall a very fun book! Keep up!
Oh my god I'm really falling behind on the editing aspect it's really passing over my head will fix it
Honestly speaking, your writing is very mature and detailed. I was very impressed with each description and dialogue it was so good. The mystery element is good!![img=recommend] Just when I thought A was the one, something makes me feel otherwise but I'm wrong again and it's a cycle that's interesting. I'm overall very impressed with how mature your writing and story flow is!! Good luck t.h
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Ah ok I think I corrected that bit thank you
Ohh not even when it's a dialogue?
It's a really interesting and capturing plot. I love how the first chapter is very emotion driven and is filled with angst which is really fun! I noticed a few error in tenses but as a fellow author I get it lol, we make mistakes. Overall it's very interesting good luck![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
thank you I have edited all your corrections!😊