Stieborn

Lv4

Just read yuri, you'll love it.

2020-12-05 BergabungGlobal

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Stieborn5 days ago
Berkomentar
I love this Arlecchino's way of thinking🤣🤣
Ch 36 Chapter 36: Tartaglia: "What a coincidence, Arlecchino, you got in trouble too?"
Fontaine's Regent, driving players crazy. (Genshin Impact)
Video Game · SpyTL
Stieborn6 days ago
Berkomentar
ah it suddenly turned into first person pov
I looked out of the window once more, only to see that the sunset was barely visible, and it was almost full night with just a hint of orange on the horizon.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasi · moonsside
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*what am I doing
'What I'm I doing?' Luna thought to herself, it was the perfect moment to take advantage of Lily's weakness, and get Aurora and herself, out of their tamed situation.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Diterbitkan
The story progression and lore is quite good. My only problem is the writing quality, there are too many punctuation marks on a single sentence, some of the grammar is wrong and even a few sentences lack words for readers to understand. Hopefully the author updates or edits the writing quality in the earlier chapters.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*man in black
The man in black, shook his head, looking at what has become of heroes this days. The two heroes, also jumped in the crater. The man black, not caring for this low rank heroes, made his presence known.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*were happening
It took time to send A ranked heroes to this place, because many heroes who were close by, were afraid when they felt the malevolent energy coming from where the disturbances, where happening.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
there are quite a lot of punctuation marks that are not needed
A man dressed in all black, finally reached, the forest park, after following the traces, of a monster, their organisation, had unintentionally let escape. They never expected, what they found, might be more dangerous, than they thought.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*would like
"Hehe- there's no need to be grumpy. I just happened to see your groups might, when you guys fought that thing, and I would for you guys to help me save my family."
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*kill it yet
"WAIT! Don't kill yet, Minion 2!'
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601
Stieborn8 days ago
Berkomentar
*cute laugh
"Y.o.u a.r.e n.e.x.t.. hehehehe..." Luna spelled out those words, with a cheerful tone, and a cute laughter, making her sound even scarier than all of the hardened criminals, the man had met during the course of his pathetic life.
Undead Empress Unintentionally Tamed The Twin Goddesses
LGBT+ · John_Wick_0601