David_Snow

so it repeated the last part a few times....

reviewing for the fp. It seems like an interesting setup.

it's definitely an interesting story. Has a great start.

really hoping that the mc can push the tiger fist into the winged white tiger form

😆 🤣 😂 man just pulled a high explosive mingun

review for the fp. Overall, it's not my cup of tea, but I can see it being liked by others

overall, it's a great start. Just seems like the writing could use a bit more structure. I love the idea that Mc is more focused on trying to live a good life versus a must have revenge

mc's master straight up killed 3 people just for looking at the Mc with murders intent.... so this thought process was wrong from the very beginning lol

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