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I loke either: The Trinity or The original Trinity imo the word Trinity sounds a lot more important (and cool) in the grand scheme of things. For an irl example think of like the holy Trinity from Christianity.
How about instead of Tri-Kings, you use Original Trinity Gentle King of the Original Trinity Tyrannical King of the Original Trinity Arrogant King of the Original Trinity Just a suggestion though. I personally think it's a bit cooler, the names don't have to be the exact same.
I'm not the best at english but I think this should be either: Said powers are different for most people. or These powers are different for most people.
Good chapter, enjoying this so far. Can't wait to see how it develops. Keep up the good work.