I tried, but it’s impossible to read, at about 12-13 chapters the main character will act like a retard, constantly mentioning his stupid waifu, who screwed herself up, then killed herself and now he’s ready to do anything for the sake of resurrection, why just You couldn’t kill her, say that she’s a lousy person and that’s it?! why should I read about a moron who wants to resurrect the killer of the girl he loved, and all the author’s explanations were at the level of “well, she’s so cool, she was always there for me, now of course she killed the one I loved, but let’s forget to this, my waifu is just super” why did you have to spoil the story and act like a retard

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I very rarely write reviews, but this time I have to for two reasons. firstly, because the rating of the work is very small, after all, on this site, any work below 4.6 is usually garbage, although lately it has been more of a lottery, because the rating does not guarantee anything. secondly, this is the whining in some reviews, how stupid everything is, one argues that the main character has achieved little, that if he were in the place of the main character, he would almost have built an empire and collected a harem (I’m exaggerating a little, but they tell such backward things that it makes your eyes pop), someone says that the story is spoiled by the girl Val, because the main character somehow communicates incorrectly, that he is too soft, although as for me the main character looks at her just like a slightly useful fool running around, from whom there are no problems at all, there were also moronic stories about how the author is building a port in the wrong place, they say that there is a better place, that you just need to open the map and... find out that the review was written by a retarded person, in general the work is good and interesting, the only negative is that it takes a long time to come out.

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it's so funny to read that he won't be able to move underwater, when he just needs to take a regular devil fruit, feed it to anyone, and then kill that person and in the end he will get a fruit that has no downsides

It was a multiverse chat with issei brother as a main hero.

it's a pity. in my opinion, the work was a little drawn out, but it was of fairly good quality.

Well, I'm ready to put 5 stars, but there is one big problem that seems to me really serious. The problem is that the main character is too strong and developing too fast, if it were a story about how not a particularly serious person just develops and looks at all sorts of events from the outside, then I would not see the problems in it, but it seems that the main goal of the main character is to lead his family to prosperity and so on, but at the same time he is in his first year and can already destroy almost the whole Britain

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Well, I'll be honest, if we take Dumbledore as a full-fledged manipulator who builds the life of the main character in a certain way, it's not so strange that he found a certain girl who would be talented, intelligent and inquisitive, as she should be useful. On the other hand, it's strange then that he didn't notice what was happening at the main character's house.

In general, if we take into account that this is still a world with super people, where you can easily beat adults at the age of 8, then this task is very simple, I could already do this at the age of 14, and here a person has superpowers

I give it 5 stars simply because of all the works here it definitely does not deserve 3.73, I gave up reading what the people here rated at 4.3, while this work goes quite well. Even if it's just copied from some site, it's at least convenient to read it on iPad

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Why?(

Please tell me a couple of spoilers, maybe I won’t want to read further either

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Can anyone tell me if the author just stole the fanfic or what? because after reading the first few chapters I didn’t see the difference between these two works and I don’t want to read further if it’s just a copy of what I’ve already read

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