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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Mercurio
Thanks for the feedback! I hear you about the characters needing more depth. I'm planning to revisit the early chapters and add more interactions and inner thoughts to really bring out their personalities. This should make it easier to connect with them. I appreciate you sticking with the story and sharing your thoughts.
Ch 7 Quirk Apprehension Test
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas TheUltimateP1e
Yes
Miquella was happy to find out that his quirk came unnaturally fast to him. While right now his light attacks weren't the most dangerous in the world, only able to slightly damage targets, he knew he would get there someday. Another thing he was able to test was Torrent, who due to being from his quirk, changed quite a bit in appearance. The stead's almost matted look from the game was replaced with silky white hair and he had a rather simple yet elegant saddle, and the most dramatic change was Torrent's horns, which now had what looked to be gold engraved into them. Ability-wise, Torrent was much the same, being able to double jump and go at insane speeds, reaching up to 65 MPH. Both quirks seemed to rely on stamina, with light attacks using more and Torrent practically using what felt like zero.
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Civilized_Monke
While I don’t know anything about horse king heracles I will say that I already have plans for torrent and how he evolves as Miquellas quirk grows and gets stronger.
Beyond ranged combat, Miquella also trained in riding Torrent. He discovered new tricks that Torrent possessed, abilities not present in the game. Miquella was amazed to find that Torrent could use his rear legs for a swift and powerful kick, catching unsuspecting opponents off guard. And unlike the game, Torrent's horns were not merely decorative; Miquella learned how to use them for a wicked headbutt maneuver, a move that could send opponents reeling.
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Retardedmadman
No it isn’t one of those while their will be fights where he will struggle or Maby even lose he’s not going to be a mc where his abilities weakness is so strong it makes his abilities useless
Finally, for the last part of his quirk, Miquella initially considered keeping it hidden. He decided against it, realizing it would be better to understand how this ability worked in this world before attempting to use it and potentially failing. He also felt it would be suspicious to use an unregistered ability at UA, especially since he didn't want anyone to think he was working with All for One. Miquella's charm ability grants him passive charisma, making people instinctively drawn to and trusting of him. He can also issue simple verbal commands that compel weaker-willed or less intelligent individuals to obey, though stronger-minded targets may resist. Miquella's most potent ability is his Close-Range Domination, which allows him to physically overpower someone's free will and force them to follow any instructions he gives them by holding them. The physical touch aspect of this ability makes it less likely for strong-willed or intelligent individuals to resist, although it still does not guarantee complete control. However, this quirk comes with significant drawbacks - the mind control abilities require concentration, and the more complex the command, the more stamina it takes.
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Retardedmadman
Thanks for the review and yes Miquella is straight in this story
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas dapper4C
It all depends on how much energy he puts in so far his first command it was a suggestion but for the second one it was a command
The taunt worked. The villain's eyes flashed with anger, and he charged forward, his massive fists raised to strike. Miquella stood his ground, his heart steady, and waited until the villain was close enough that Todoroki couldn't hear him. In a low voice, he said, "Fall."
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Alfiemooon
I mean, those were just a few examples. There are a lot more people who are freakishly tall, like Nighteye who is 6'7" and Endeavor who is 6'5". Both of their heights have nothing to do with their Quirk. You also have to remember that this is a world where one of the biggest heroes has a literal foot of his body, which is all neck, and a dude with a spray bottle for a head. Additionally, I don't know if you have read up to the further chapters, but I have shown that both are naturally stronger than the average person, with Miquella being almost twice as strong and Malenia in her bloomed form being almost 10 times as strong, which would most likely support their growth.
Ten years had passed since they began their training, and now they were both fourteen years old, and both Miquella and Malenia had grown taller than their peers. Miquella stood at 6'3 while Malenia reached a staggering 7'0, making them tower over most of their classmates, and add on Their long hair and golden eyes, made them stand out among their peers. Over the past years, they had not only grown physically but also in skill, achieving black belts in judo and karate. They also focused on honing their quirk abilities primarily on stamina depletion, and further developing the existing skills they already had.
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thereddeath4 months ago
Balas Alfiemooon
My Hero Academia features numerous characters who are exceptionally tall. All Might stands over seven feet tall, despite not being born with a quirk. Fat Gum is even taller, exceeding 8 feet in height. I also am going by the MHA theory that as quirks evolved over time, the average person's body naturally became more durable and physically resilient. This could explain why many characters in the MHA universe can reach such impressive heights without experiencing the health complications typically associated with extreme heights in our world.
Ten years had passed since they began their training, and now they were both fourteen years old, and both Miquella and Malenia had grown taller than their peers. Miquella stood at 6'3 while Malenia reached a staggering 7'0, making them tower over most of their classmates, and add on Their long hair and golden eyes, made them stand out among their peers. Over the past years, they had not only grown physically but also in skill, achieving black belts in judo and karate. They also focused on honing their quirk abilities primarily on stamina depletion, and further developing the existing skills they already had.
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thereddeath5 months ago
Balas TheUltimateP1e
They don't travel at light speed yet, as his quirk involves light-like energy attacks. This allows him to alter the physical properties of his attacks, transforming them from light bullets into swords and even blunt weapons.
Encouraged by Alfred's words, Miquella's confidence soared. He continued to practice and refine his skills, incorporating techniques he had observed from various media and his own spells. In addition to his light bullets, he recreated the Solar Flare technique from Dragon Ball, finding it useful for creating distractions when cornered. The blinding burst of light provided a momentary advantage, allowing him to reposition or launch a counterattack with his light bullets or his own version of Radagon's Ring of Light.
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thereddeath5 months ago
Balas TheUltimateP1e
The reason he's learning martial arts, even though he has a ranged quirk, is that if someone gets too close, he'd be at a major disadvantage. so he wants to cover all his disadvantages
On the other hand, Miquella struggled to keep up. While he was decent in judo, swordplay didn't come naturally to him. He fumbled with the wooden sword, his movements clumsy and awkward.
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In mha as Miquella the kind (MHA/Elden Ring) On hiatus

Mike, a 16-year-old gamer, dies in a tragic accident after a long gaming session. He finds himself in a void, where a being of light tells him he can be reincarnated. The being explains that his new powers and destination will be based on his last game and show. Mike, having played Elden Ring and watched My Hero Academia, chooses to go to the world of My Hero Academia with the powers of Rahdahn. However, the being informs him that his reincarnation will be determined by a wheel of fate, and he ends up being reincarnated as Miquella. I want to clarify that this story is purely for fun and to help me practice my writing skills. While I am open to receiving constructive criticism to improve my writing, I kindly request that any feedback provided remains respectful and constructive. Insults directed towards my story will not be accepted. Image not mine I found the image on Tumbler by someone named serrraphim.

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