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It is peculiar to note that the span of the story, encompassing over 100 chapters, is condensed within a mere 10 days. The progression of events, such as the initial meeting followed by a proposal and subsequent cohabitation with twin children, appears to be hasty and unrealistic. Furthermore, the development of the romantic relationship between the characters is rushed, with a kiss occurring on the 6th day and discussions of falling in love on the 9th. The author may benefit from considering a longer time frame and allowing for a more gradual and believable progression of events in the story.

It is peculiar to note that the span of the story, encompassing over 100 chapters, is condensed within a mere 10 days. The progression of events, such as the initial meeting followed by a proposal and subsequent cohabitation with twin children, appears to be hasty and unrealistic. Furthermore, the development of the romantic relationship between the characters is rushed, with a kiss occurring on the 6th day and discussions of falling in love on the 9th. The author may benefit from considering a longer time frame and allowing for a more gradual and believable progression of events in the story.

I have come across this book several times and found it interesting but never read it, because "system" is a total turn off for me.

true.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Main leads being shameless and flirting with each other is exactly what I want. hehehe. can't wait to read it. please pick this book. #sweetlove

I love it too. couldn't wait for the translations and read the raws

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

and so much better than this story. loved the main leads interaction. 😭💞