TheMizMind

It's alright for an author to give five stars to their work, right? This is most definitely not shameless... why are you reading this with that look on your face? Stop - I don't like that.

"Bullet Knight" shows promise from the start, with an intriguing premise that captures the reader's attention. However, some noticeable flaws hinder the overall reading experience. The transitions within the first chapter are abrupt and lack smoothness, making it challenging to follow the narrative flow. While the novel showcases an impressive vocabulary, grammatical struggles can distract and disconnect the reader. It requires careful attention to grasp the story, and reading hastily may confuse. Despite these shortcomings, "Bullet Knight" remains a compelling tale with untapped potential. The story possesses elements that can captivate readers once the readability issues are addressed. With some refinements and improved engagement, it can fully immerse and resonate with its audience.

How would he know if he asked and he didn't mention a title?

Very sharp transition

Oh, just what I needed: a recipe for chaos and absurdity. Thanks, Recipe Club. This book is pure comedic gold! #sarcasm #wasteoftime [Charater Count :/]

I'm just a shameless nameless author who writes and has commitment issues with their novels. I hope I can bring to you a story you'll remember and come enjoyment.

Some grammatical mistakes still, but I'm seeing a huge leap in writing skills. Keep up the good work!

You wouldn't capitalize mountain here unless your mountain's name is literally Mountain

I like the premise and the idea behind the story; however, I don't think this was executed in a way that shows its full potential. There is a lot of refinement needed which is very common in new authors, and a lot of grammatical errors that need to be fixed. The first impression is everything, I recommend at least fixing up your first few chapters to hook in the reader! I hope my review helped!

Thank you