CaptainChaos0301
hi im dee all my works are going under a rewrite now so i might delete those chapters and/or update them with the rewritten ones.
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This is VERY good, ngl. The writing style isn't the best but it is VERY good for an online novel. This is a contemporary fantasy romance and I never knew I was going to like it as I'm not that big of a fan of romances in general, good luck to the author on this though, they sound like a very good writer
Underrated book right here, my dudes. The first paragraph was enough to make me get hooked. I am genuinely impressed. The writing style is similar to a best selling author, and that’s a good thing cuz those books are one of the bests. Why are the best books the most underrated? Idk. I will not hesitate to recommend this. The Characters are also very cool! I honestly want to find constructive criticism to give but even that seems impossible. There are a few issues but those are irrelevant. the plot seems a bit cliche but i swear to non the existent god that this is 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚝𝚑 𝚒𝚝. Give it a read. And no, I don’t take criticisms for liking this book.
oh, i have a heart made out of a diamond. unbreakable. :)
Heart isnt meat ;-; its something that provides life to non-plants
...again, change your grammar
STOP SWITCHING TENSES
your literally using 2 different tenses and clshing them together. no wonder why you have only 1,whateverK reads
I have the urge to re-edit this entire book for you. Please get better at your writing