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LunaKindred

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Jesus can turn water into wine, But i can turn your mother into mine ~Sun Tzu Art of War

2020-10-29 BergabungGlobal
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred12h
    Balas Mozuto

    Kay, I'll waiting for it 👍

    Ch 40 STB: Chapter 39
    STB: Runes and Vampires
    Komik · Mozuto
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred14h
    Berkomentar

    Your rakudai kishi no cavalry fics is no ready yet?

    Ch 40 STB: Chapter 39
    STB: Runes and Vampires
    Komik · Mozuto
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred16h
    Diterbitkan

    Cringe. The quality of the akikan's fics is really downgrade after his dxd fics. I just don't want to waste my time, reading this cringes. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Komik · akikan40
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred1d
    Balas MrKawaii03

    Wdym? Is kenshin gonna get isekai-ed or something?

    Ch 118 Barbatos, the Anemo Archon
    Souls in Teyvat
    Derivasi dari game · ARandomMob
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred4d
    Berkomentar

    New chapter please?

    Ch 4 Ode to the Wind [2]
    Genshin: The Journey Within
    Derivasi dari game · Bizarre_
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred4d
    Berkomentar

    Bro writing a story but lacking creativity

    Ch 38 Chapter 38: Devil's Offer
    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
    Komik · Bronz_Deck
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred5d
    Balas KangTL

    New chapter, where bro?

    Multiverse Chronicles (OPM)
    Komik · KangTL
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred5d
    Diterbitkan

    Absolute peak indeed. For dxd fics, this one is really a fresh air. No rias route plot, no forced chess game with sona, no killing issei, no stealing boosted gear. But It seems that the author has no experience in writing action scenes, of course it just a minor flaw. It's still worth to read

    I Cast Fist (Celestial Grimoire - DxD)
    Komik · purplestormtaken
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Berkomentar

    Honestly I prefer the kind of story where MC can wander around and sleep with women, just like your caretaker fics.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: A Surprise
    Beyond the Old Ones
    Komik · ImBoredSoMehl
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Berkomentar

    Tftc. I can't wait for the time mc meets jingliu or sterelon hunter

    Ch 59 Morning Rises
    Honkai Star Rail: The Archiver
    Derivasi dari game · _Kirirei_
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Diterbitkan

    This fic is very long and boring. With a schedule of 2 chapters per week and more than 40 chapters per arc, it would need about 5 months to clearing 1 arc. Dang, that's fkin long, yes? and the worst thing is that the character development is really bad and didn't have any improvement... That's suck

    Welcome to the Multiverse Chat Group!
    Komik · EclypseX
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Berkomentar

    TFTC. May I know your updates schedule?

    Ch 207 CHAPTER 235: The Threat (II)
    Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
    Komik · GloriousMilfHunter
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Diterbitkan

    Sorry mate I just can't, I haven't even reached chapter 10 yet and I can't keep going. The story is too boring and the plot holes in the beginning have made me lazy to read it. Mc suddenly came out of nowhere and got the plot armor, op system, and op starter pack. Just from seeing all that, I know that the character development won't be good. Mc's personalities is also very flat and emo. Also how the author wrote scathach's character is really a big flaw. Even if she gets nerfed, the only thing that decreases is her physical strength and her abilities will remain intact. And instead of act as a wise teacher she is more like a puppy who always follows behind mc. I will recommend you to rewriting it with more solid story plans and a better characters development

    Into the Infinite of animes and fictions!! Starting with the system!!
    Komik · Safronox
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred7d
    Diterbitkan

    Sorry buddy, but I'll take my old review. This fic is very chinese, so much chinese references and it feels like I'm reading some xianxia bullsh– than reading a genshin fic and I can't handle it cz it's so weird for me. It just not my cup of a coffee, how sad

    Genshin Impact: The Beginning With Judgement Of Shamash
    Derivasi dari game · Firesight
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred7d
    Diterbitkan

    This fic is decent, there's nothing special about MC's personality, he's so flat and boring. Right now, he just looks like your everyday Japanese slice of life normal protagonist. I hope he gets some character development as soon as possible. Also, what's wrong with Genben Shinji? As a man he is a jerk and you turned him into her and made her a bitc–?

    Restaurant Of In Between
    Komik · Charlottes
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred7d
    Berkomentar

    As long you can upload 1 chp/ 2 or 3 day i think it's okay. And i think people like your other fics cz they are more familiar with dxd than gbf

    Ch 48 43. Farewell For Now
    000 - What Makes The Sky Blue
    Derivasi dari game · IamReallySalad
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred7d
    Berkomentar

    Gave them SAM armor, that's a better equipment than using TSF model

    Ch 147 Chapter 146 - The Beginning of The End Part 4
    Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)
    Lainnya · Daoist_KittyKat
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred8d
    Berkomentar

    Kyrie eleson go brrrrr

    Ch 524 Chapter 474
    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Komik · AStoryForOne
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred9d
    Berkomentar

    TFTC. Can't you edit his name, nguyen ryou is makes my tongue really itchy. Also, what's wrong with Chinese mtl using half Vietnam half Japanese name, that's strange. And i think Nguyen and ruan has the same meaning, ruan ryou is much better than freakin nguyen

    Ch 5 [FGO]: 5
    Player's Journey In Anime World
    Komik · AbsoluteCode
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred11d
    Balas kidness

    Any romance, harem so far?

    Making Honkai Impact III in the world where Kallen exists
    Derivasi dari game · kidness
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