Humankitty123

If you can get around some of the annoying typos that happen, which I personally honestly kinda like they on more than one occasion add quite a bit of funny moments to the novel, this is one of the best novels I have read on the site. My standards are normally fairly low since this is self published work but I can absolutely say this exceeded them. Good job Pancakes!

dominant eyes are specific to the individual. Much in the same way you would think of dominant hands. In fact, you can essentially be ambidextrous in your eyes where both eyes are equally dominant but this is extremely rare

confuse cant bleed to death but have to worry about bleeding to death

Shiro is that you?

smh

maybe he's talking in relevance to fitness levels?