TheTeller

Don't mind being the first. Another shameless opinion, I came here to say this book has becoming a journey. Its hard interacting with you lot, can't tell how your doing nor how you love it so far, but don't shy away, your Authors here everyday. Feel free to like, comment, or review, whatever you do... I suggest keeping this one in a save filed.

After the first chapter, this worlds' interesting. Dealings with advanced technology, military power ecetra, etcetera--if you could reel it in a bit tighter: some proofreading possible, greater introductory of a 'new character', and a bit formatting on paragraphs for us readers. But no, this is good.

ah, u made it

Well, I’ giving it 5 stars. I think it’s gonna be one of my best works. I put a lot into the world building and the story/character development. It’ll take a slow pace, but we’ll get there. 🤝🏾

What not want

Dribbling not Drinking

He’ll not heel

How not hat

its nota done. progress has just been very slow.

further along the story i will