The_Little_Hero

if you don't mind could you tell me what Rika would say if she was called? im also curious how Light convinced her to give the points to the second years.

Note that what I said here is not always the truth. If Chang Luo Chen is so incompetent that he needs plot armor to have his life saved, I won't save him, if his sacrifice at the final destination makes things more interesting I might sacrifice him. The truth isn't always stepped in stone.

I agree, I didn't take this novel to seriously back then so later when I'm ending the volume 1 I will fix some of these plotholes. There are also some mistakes in powerscaling towards chapter 20 that I will fix later on.

the matter between Luo Chen and Emperor Of Heaven is about mutual benefits, plus the Emperor can also have other targets than Luo Chen, if he is too weak and can't solve his tribulations he will be abandoned, not saved, both the Emperor Of Heaven and The Administrator will do the same thing.

thanks man for the appreciated review. I will try to balance my work time and update it more frequently these days, but it's still somewhat difficult, so keep reading and enjoy the new chapters soon, it will take a while before it reaches the climax of the first volume and Luo Chen becomes a true demon but it will be worth it. You will be shocked by how savage some things can get.

Hey man, I appreciate that you took your time reading my story. Now for your claims, I'd love to see some of these 'copies' of Reverend Insanity that you claim there are because if something out there can be considered a copy it means that it needs to be somewhat good to even compare them slightly, especially to a master piece like Reverend Insanity. The only one that has such rights is Warlock Of The Magus World, basically by your words you know a lot of stories on that level which honestly I'd love to read, wo why not give me some examples. Also you critiqued the novel when I haven't finished rhe first volume, can you tell me what about it is generic, it's a evil world that interlocks with evil politics and power, there are many people who may want power and their common sense will dictate them to do evil, it's nothing generic but a natural reaction. Naturally I love to do a novel about an evil world, this is yhe ature of this world. Going by you arguments you implement that im coping the idea of Reverend Insanity of evil world. Do you know how this logic works? It's the same as critiquing painters of painting things life sub, forest, moon, etc. Making an evil world in a story is the same and going by your logic Warlock Of The Magus World which has similar nature to Reverend Insanity also copies it. Don't forget that in terms of writing ideas are mostly worthless, its execution that works, and even then there are very few stories with similar ideas to an proper evil mc like Fang Yuan and proper evil world like the gu world where benefits are essential. One more thing if you want to critique me of bad writing at least try to come with your story and idea and make it great yourself, put in the work before the complaint. I saw that you have a novel as well but gave up on it. Rather than critiquing me isn't it better to invest your time on developing your work.

Legendary novel from author with legendary reputation. Character, conflicts, worldbuilding philosophy are all amazing. I definitely have high expectations from you given your role model (Great Love Immortal Venerable) and I'm pretty sure you'll deliver, good luck with the future of your novel and hope you don't drop it for any pointless reason.

This is what we call a high level grooming tehnique

MasterPiece compared to the webnovel standard, so a 5 star review from me. MC is a real powerful veteran, who will do anything to achieve his dream. He has opportunities, and a strong ability that will allow him to achieve numerous evolutionary possibilities, among those there are other inspirations on how to use these abilities based on other fictional works. His enemies are insanely OP as well with their magic that can let them reach God level, also many abilities and haxes, which could put immense pressure on the mc. The cosmology is also different from our own, giving it an air of mystery towards what adventure and adversity will he face when he will leave the safety of his planet and adventure on this endless abyss called the universe. One with different laws of physics and logic than our own.

The Administrator -> In The Heaven We Trust