trayad70

This book has a great storyline and interesting characters. At first I wasnt’t for the trupple, but it grew on me. What hasn’t grown on me is the amount of wasted words the author utilizes in their efforts of creating visual descriptions of the scenery and characters. Literally, in most chapters, the 1st few pages are repetitive descriptions of the ‘lush estate’ or ‘beauty of the mls. If they have to provide a detailed reminder every chapter of the aesthetic prowess of the characters & backdrop, do it in 1-2 paragraphs per chapter rather than repeating yourself multiple times wasting multiple pages of each chapter. A proofreader is definitely needed.

The author literally described and repeated the same scenerio 5 different times in not so different 5 different ways… this book has a good storyline but needs a serious edit.

Omg… how many times are their hair, eyes & aura going to be described??? We got a pretty good grasp of that early, early on in the book.

They are doing way too much. This is dumb👎

Agreed…. This does not make sense!

One of the BEST stories I’ve read since becoming BLNovel fan! Fantastic! No o guess I’l read your next novel!

I’m getting a little suspicious Kwang. He seems to know way too much about everyone 🤔🤫🫣

AWwww S*#z!

Han Han such a sly butth@@@ but u gotta luv him!😆

Why are the privelage chapters so expensive?