I liked the story quite a lot, firstly because I am a lover of romance, and secondly for the old Japanese style setting, also has a good character development that makes it easy for the reader to understand the story, perhaps it could be improved a little in the area of description, however it is easy to achieve immersion in this story, good work....

It is a literary work of poetic and slightly heavy reading, there are too many names to memorize them all, but it is still a good start, maybe you should improve a little the specification of the characters beyond their ages, such as physique, hair color, eyes, etc, although I can not say much more because it was a prologue and I'm more used to reading fantasy XD, I felt at some point like I was reading hamlet at some point XD ....