BlueBawlz98
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its dame!
not even that I'd you add the time line of events the dudes in his 100s
time live does not add up, he was way older than 88. he was 48 when he got out 69 when he got the monkey the monkey kicked the bucket due to age so add 10 to 20 years adopted a kid after 5 the kids married and had a kid after another 10 to 15 then he died around when the kid was maybe 5 to 10. dudes in his 100s
so did the dude live to 100? he was 69 when he got the pub 74 when he got ceaser, probably 90 when the chimp died of old age,95 when he got Ellie 105 when she got married 110 when he kicked the bucket. timeline not adding up here. dudes like old chuck Norris
why would he adopt a 10 year old as a elderly on his last leg. dude would be dead before there 18
or in his 90s chimps can live a good amount of time.
that's after years of training
so is the mc by this time like 90?
government would, Even then you had to have a license to have exotic animals. this was standard after WW2 to stop people bringing animals as pets that could potentially cause issues if it escapes or was abandoned. less of a issue for people more for environment. like hogs for example brought over for hunting then found out they had no natural predators and destroy tons of farms, animals, etc. look for example Thailand's monkey problem they attach people in groups even though there hunted.
we'll his name, booker would be a name found in England or the US, maybe Canada. and chimps are found in Africa, deep asia, maybe South America jungle.
so did the mc shoot the chimp to claim him as a pet? chances of being alive after getting hit with a .308 is slim on a small animal. a chest hit will tear out most of the back. btw a .308 is a very common round for hunting. unless the author men's a varmit rifle used for small game. chances the mc stubbled on a chimp dying from a rifle shot and save it from blood loss it's like winning the lottery and being hit with a meteor .
ya this dudes almost 70 venturing in wild Africa or deep asia to run into a chimp. a dog, cat, wolf pup sure. a chimp seems very random with a elderly
a chimp? he's got a English name so unless he found it in Africa or asia no country would let you take a chimp home unless you have a special license. going to have to say I just started reading this and the beginning is poorly written like it's a middle schooler story. I would suggest you rewrite parts of the story. nothing wrong with editing a story later to flow better.
military uses pigs that get shot by there medics to train there medics on how to handle wounded after being shot. it's bloody and gross but effective
I'm guessing it's the flowers, the hole sizes vary to the point of being too small but the flowers are not touched. roots gonna get them
wouldn't say betraying, just not following orders. human or not the ga thinking of using this event and thinking it would work without thinking the natives would eventually learn of there tech and would know they had a means and knew the ga was aware of what was going to happen. he a kredissue all over again
dnd one bud