Omkar_More_3591

great brother . U really made us wait though 🙂

let's not start with the story , the chs are pathetically short and no concrete plot in each ch it's like he is cutting down every ch into 4 parts and updating.... improve upon this in your next chs or story

The story has a preview of 20chapters he is taking 10 ch for explaining his mc powers wtf. I do not hate slow paced works but this just too much, it decreases the connection with th novel and adds useless word count

I can never understand why you want mc to be a sophisticated idiot trying to show his hypocrisy with a idiot face. a world where law is nothing but a tool in hand of powerful you want mc to a strong slave under it right. what to say as expected of you huh!

this is one of the worst fanfics of Naruto I have read as it left a bad aftertaste at ch 27...bro wtf mc and root ...what the f*** are you imagining

exp exp expppppp