Mistaken_Smile
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is he an idiot?
pretty sure any A rank demolishes
100% agreed, it's like oh I saw someone die once now I'm gonna make a magical creature that will take away all the magic in the world
not the worst name I've seen. this one fanfic thought that naming their MC goofy would be a good idea, I read the synopsis and didn't give it a second look
you're adding characters like Luffy and still think your character is gonna measure up with what is basically a minor enhancement quirk?
still don't get why they don't have chakra. even if you wanted to nerf the characters they should still have chakra since they wished for the powers of Madara, obito, and itachi
it's Yeah not yah
fire the editor
just saying, maybe it's time to find a new editor.
I would fire that editor if I were you
hey just saying I wouldn't want to pay an editor for this. you should fire them
yep this confirms that you should fire the editor
again fire your editor
man you gotta fire your editor
if you are going to use the word either in a paragraph there needs to be an alternative. "either he was dreaming OR this was actually real"