Richard_AW

I personally agree with him.I kinda liked when MC was a happy to lucky dude.It was kinda a bit of turn off when the MC that i like change his personality to become some revenge type (ATG).And try to put more interaction between the MC and harem.Because in Erosu book,The Earlier waifu was being forgotten and later on become only a background.Overall Author it is still an S tier harem novel that i have read.Keep up the good work!!!!! Looking foward to your next work!!!!!

It was pretty good , just focus on the story and the realationship to the MC.And you Should be fine.Please Dont make the harem too big (20+).I kinda recommend it around 11-15 Because the personality will not be gone.Or Its gonna be similar to AST (Ancient Strenghtening Technique),where all of MC woman just lost in the Background

Author,Are you going to drop the novel?I Hope Not.It is stil a good novel.

Spoiler Alert. Author,The rest of the chapter is good.But After that chapter when Betty kissed Andrea,it gave a bad taste to me(Light NTR).Even though it aint being done with a Man. I Hope that kind of thing aint happening anymore in the upcoming chapter.