Buffsparce

pretty much anywhere that is a bit remote will have gaelic signs.

I really enjoy this and hope it continues.

I want to preface this by saying that this is a really nice piece of fiction and I do find myself wanting to follow along for however long this goes on but I have one major problem with the story that I just can't get my head around. This doesn't feel at all like a book about vengeance in the sort if this was about a god of wrath I wouldn't have complaints and it would be 5 stars but the mc doesn't show enough or feel enough for this to be vengeance. I'm not good at explaining so I'll make it shorter, how can you truly seek vengeance if you didn't care about them enough in the first place. The mc is constantly portrayed as only caring for his mother and asgard and having genuine hatred, lack of care, or disgust for everyone else around him. The whole previous world backstory about him killing people after he left the monks was prefaced with a sentence stating he never really was on great terms with his team or it at least seemed that way. But if this book was prefaced with wrath instead of vengeance all these comments I could say aren't a downside and instead show his mindset due to his powers and him trying to control it. Again I'm not good with words but I'll say this author incase u read this review but I really like your fiction and I am still going to read along but if there isn't some personal development in the compassion department I think this should be changed to wrath instead of vengeance as I don't think it agrees with the type of mc you are wanting to portray and this could end up hampering your future story as the readers might ask why is he seeking vengeance if he didnt care for that character.

Really fun to read and honestly a nice and fun change from normal HP fanfics. At the moment I would definitely describe this as a lighthearted comedy type read in my opinion with the mc being a dozey with a fun-crazy persona that definitely fits the line of insanity and genius. But with the amount of chapters present that could change in the future. I don't really write reviews and this probably shows, so I'll finish with this, if you want to read something genuinely nice and fun to read, read this.

Honestly an amazing read. It was just so fun to go along with the story.