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I ain't gonna lie that felt like a huge let down

I would not recommend reading this story as of chapter 25 it feels just bland a bit boring and nothing really happens this doesn't happen in the original story if you're looking for something new and exciting this is not it. Even though this says it's a SI it's not really apart from that the writing and spellings pretty on point no complaints there.

The story is very fun the translation can be a bit funky sometimes but apart from that it's a very fun read I think if you want a story about a steady growth of power it feels very natural I'd say give it a go it's worth it in my opinion. this opinion was based on 44 chapters deep as that's how many there was at the time

Very good so far the first 20 chapters are a joy to read and I can't wait for more if you want my opinion this is definitely worth a read hopefully the author continues this trend.

What can I say this is a very good book the chapter is a well organised the writing is smooth there's not many mistakes if any in the spelling just give it a read and if you'd like this type of thing of a smart strong protagonist taking the reins then you're enjoy it if you don't like that don't read it because you won't enjoy it. Author you've done a great job here and hopefully you continue to.

I wasn't sure what to make of this at first but finished at chapter 10 as thus all that there was at the time so far it's pretty good I'm not keen that he's going to join the team but hopefully it's done right. It should be fine hopefully this story continues in a good way but if you want my opinion it's worth a read so far.

This just isn't it if you want my opinion. don't waste your time on this but hey it's your life just read a couple of chapters in you'll see what I mean.

i love this fic you sir are my new favourite author can't wait for more ;)

great chatper mate ty ty

spelling is good story is fine but do not come into this thinking is going to be MC= OP. The MC feels weak and his weakness feels forced. hopefully the story continue and evolves. 3.5 / 5